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The Signal by Ron Carlson – Suspenseful nature writing

The Signal by Ron Carlson (2019) French title: Le signal. Translated by Sophie Aslanides.

“Meet me,” she said. “You can do that, right?” We’ll make our last trip next month. Meet me, and we’ll fish Clark Lake for the last time.”

Somehow air came to his chest with that and he said quietly, “Deal.” He looked up into her face, the seriousness and the concern. He opened his handand closed it around the little white cup. “I will be there. Cold Creek trailhead.”

He’d been there ten times; this was the tenth time. Every year on the same day, the Ides of September, nine fifteen. The promise had been made that first time and they’d kept it nine times. We’ll do this every year. They weren’t married the first time, and then they had been married eight times, and now they weren’t married again. As far as he knew.

In The Signal, Ron Carlson writes the story of a last hiking and fishing trip between Mack and Vonnie. We’re in Wyoming, in the Wind Rivers Mountain area.

Mack and Vonnie met when they were teenagers. Mack’s father had a ranch and turned it into a dude ranch during ten weeks each summer to bring in additional income and keep the ranch afloat. Vonnie came as a guest with her parent and fell in love with the West. Enough to come back to the area.

As mentioned in the opening quote, Mack and Vonnie had been married eight years when Mack spiraled down into a hole of alcohol and bad decisions. One of them was driving illegal merchandise, including drugs, through Wyoming. He finally got caught, ended up in jail and lost Vonnie in the process.

They are now taking a closure trip to Clarke Lake and the book opens with Mack waiting for Vonnie to show up at their meeting point at the beginning of the trail.

What Vonnie doesn’t know is that Mack also agreed to do a job for Charley Yarnell, a shady entrepreneur. Mack needs the money to keep his family’s ranch. All he has to do is to find a beacon that fell from an airplane. Yarnell gave him a military Blackberry that should detect the beacon as soon as it is within a mile range of it. It sounds simple enough and a way to kill two birds with one stone.

The Signal is divided in six days, one per hiking day. Carlson takes us to the Wind River Mountain trails, lakes and wilderness. Vonnie and Mack take a hike down memory lane, trying to make peace and put an end to their relationship. Vonnie has moved on and lives with Kent now and Mack needs to accept it, even he still loves her.

Their trip takes a bad turn when they encounter aggressive poachers and when Mack’s beacon search proves to be a lot more dangerous than expected.

The book starts as a love autopsy, a cathartic hike to mourn their couple and turns into a suspenseful story as Mack’s side mission collides with their trip.

Mack’s introspection brings him to analyze his past. He was born on a ranch, loved it but was never a rancher. He’s not good with fire arms, not good with cattle and is not cut out to manage a ranch. However, he can’t imagine live anywhere else than on his childhood ranch. He tried to make a living in IT but he was never really successful. His life took a dive when his father died as he lost his human compass and became untethered. His grief engulfed him and he lost his sense of direction.

Ron Carlson’s writing is sumptuous and I wish I had more quotes to share but I read it in translation. Carlson weaves the landscape into Mack and Vonnie’s story. This is their anniversary hike and this outdoor trip is part of their relationship. Nature is what brought them together and now they expect it to heal their wounds to be able to move on. The descriptions of the wilderness and how Mack and Vonnie connect to it and through it are truly excellent.

Carlson is another writer I want to explore.

Highly recommended. Another great find by Gallmeister, with a marvelous translation by Sophie Aslanides.

  1. June 20, 2021 at 9:28 am

    Wyoming is one part of the US I’ve never been but I do like the idea of those wide open spaces. I shall make a note of this book for when I get a yearning for some virtual travel


    • June 20, 2021 at 10:09 am

      I was supposed to go there last year, the trip was all set up and then the Covid happened. *sigh*
      There’s a Wyoming & Montana category on my blog if you’re looking for more books like this.


  2. June 20, 2021 at 9:54 pm

    It sounds like a book with an interesting combination of story lines set in a beautiful place.


    • June 25, 2021 at 8:49 pm

      It’s an excellent read, one you can read in one sitting and escape.


  3. June 21, 2021 at 2:35 pm

    This sounds a tense read. I’d love to visit Wyoming too – I hope your trip goes ahead as soon as it’s safe again.


    • June 25, 2021 at 8:50 pm

      It’s an excellent book, really.

      Next trip with be in South Carolina, for personal reasons.
      Montana and Wyoming will have to wait…

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  4. buriedinprint
    June 21, 2021 at 4:35 pm

    I’ve never been to Wyoming but I absolutely love the setting. (Here is a recent roundup of Wyoming writing on BIP, if you’re keen: http://www.buriedinprint.com/wyoming-stories/) I think of Ron Carlson as being like Carl Hiassen is for Florida; I’ve not read either, but I have a feeling I’d enjoy them both.


    • June 25, 2021 at 9:04 pm

      Thanks for the link to your post, there’s an interesting choice of writers there.
      The closest I’ve been to Wyoming was during my trip in Alberta.


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